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Old May 26 2006, 02:12 AM   #12
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Short Fiction: 2A The Ship who Sang

"(by Hargreaves given wrongly given as the translator)"

should read

(given wrongly by Hargreaves as the translator)

Reason: the prepositional phrase follows the verb, and the adverb intevenes, as it modifies the verb not the prepositional phrase.
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