Feedback: The Writing On The Wall - A Meeting of Minds

HarperBrandy · Apr 24 2007, 01:30 AM

This is the place to tell me what you thought. Don't worry about hurting my feelings. How else are we to learn and grow if someone doesn't point out the mistakes?

**Cheryl** · Apr 24 2007, 08:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HarperBrandy

I hate for my very first post to be this fanfiction, but I just found this lovely site and I just can't help myself!

There's no reason you can't start out with posting fanfic. And if it was vetted by Laurie/Shalyn then I'm looking forward to reading it when I have time!

In the meantime, Welcome

to MoM, and feel free to go introduce yourself in the Cafe forum.

edith · May 2 2007, 04:25 AM

I've read it on AMCF- its a very good story- I hope there's more soon!

Shalyn · May 3 2007, 07:57 AM

*looks in inbox*

Nothing yet. What I really like about this one is that it's not just another typical "bronzerider wins the Weyrleader flight to make Pern a better place".

Hmm. Maybe creative juices are flowing enough to go back to work on fanfic at least.

GinnyStar · Jun 14 2008, 05:14 PM

feedback thread: Still new a fan written stories. So far so good. AU I think. Sorry abuot my bit reply. I had to get in down before I lost your story thread. That young bronze saving his queen. The aftermath and how his friendship is trying to bring him out of his shell.

GinnyStar · Jun 14 2008, 06:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Shalyn

*looks in inbox*

Nothing yet. What I really like about this one is that it's not just another typical "bronzerider wins the Weyrleader flight to make Pern a better place".

Hmm. Maybe creative juices are flowing enough to go back to work on fanfic at least.

I say it is. But good AU is it? See my othe notes along the way.

I write them down but write is hit and mis.

Keep going!

I hope to read more fan written works.

GinnyStar · Mar 6 2010, 10:24 PM

I do hope there is more on this I just re read it.

Apr 24 2007, 01:30 AM	#1
HarperBrandy Inactive Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: California	The Writing On The Wall This is the place to tell me what you thought. Don't worry about hurting my feelings. How else are we to learn and grow if someone doesn't point out the mistakes?

May 2 2007, 04:25 AM	#3
edith Dragonrider Weyrwoman Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Delft Fan of: Most of them :) Now Reading: Don't You Have Time To Think- RP Feynman	Re: (Feedback) The Writing On The Wall I've read it on AMCF- its a very good story- I hope there's more soon! __________________ "Should a rocket explode upon starting, it is called a "hard start." " http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hypergolic

May 3 2007, 07:57 AM	#4
Shalyn Inactive Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Loo-a-vull / Luhvuhl / Loo-ih-ville / Loo-a-ville / Looeyville / Lewisville Oh, Heck. Kentuckiana. Fan of: Dragonflight	Re: (Feedback) The Writing On The Wall looks in inbox Nothing yet. What I really like about this one is that it's not just another typical "bronzerider wins the Weyrleader flight to make Pern a better place". Hmm. Maybe creative juices are flowing enough to go back to work on fanfic at least.

Jun 14 2008, 05:14 PM	#5
GinnyStar Dolphineer Craftmaster Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Wausau, Wisconsin, USA -- CST or CDT Pronouns: SheShe Fan of: PShPern BB, Tia., and Oth Now Reading: MHOP, Books Jerry Apps, Too Many to Post	Re: Chapter 2 feedback thread: Still new a fan written stories. So far so good. AU I think. Sorry abuot my bit reply. I had to get in down before I lost your story thread. That young bronze saving his queen. The aftermath and how his friendship is trying to bring him out of his shell. __________________ Lover s s, s and friends Lover of and beads, http://www.change.org/profiles/GinnyStar Dragoncave GinnyStar2 Jellied Dragons Lair of Dragons http://dragcave.net/user/GinnyStar2 Thanks! Others: None at this time WIP http://archiveofourown.org/works/252259 http://www.daisy.org/learning-difficulties Last edited by Cheryl; Jun 14 2008 at 06:09 PM. Reason: removed quote of entirety of Chapter 2 of story

Mar 6 2010, 10:24 PM	#7
GinnyStar Dolphineer Craftmaster Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Wausau, Wisconsin, USA -- CST or CDT Pronouns: SheShe Fan of: PShPern BB, Tia., and Oth Now Reading: MHOP, Books Jerry Apps, Too Many to Post	Re: (Feedback) The Writing On The Wall I do hope there is more on this I just re read it. __________________ Lover s s, s and friends Lover of and beads, http://www.change.org/profiles/GinnyStar Dragoncave GinnyStar2 Jellied Dragons Lair of Dragons http://dragcave.net/user/GinnyStar2 Thanks! Others: None at this time WIP http://archiveofourown.org/works/252259 http://www.daisy.org/learning-difficulties

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