Verse: Melia - A Meeting of Minds

ghyle · Oct 27 2009, 09:47 AM

"Melia"

In the leaves of my ash is the breath of the wind,
...and I sing with it, sing of my love
who had courted me, lain with me, seldom had sinned
...in the eyes of the Lady of Love.

Yet the span of a mortal is short and is swift,
...and my honey was spent with his death,
yet his kiss was the sweetest of anyone's gift
...that had touched me, my body or breath.

P'ter · Oct 27 2009, 10:54 AM

Wow!

jube · Oct 27 2009, 07:11 PM

WELL DONE

GinnyStar · Oct 31 2009, 03:27 AM

Cool, nicely written!

Oct 27 2009, 09:47 AM	#1
ghyle Hrruban Eighth Hrruban Speaker Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: northeast New South Wales Gender: M Fan of: Pern & Freedom Now Reading: The Umbrella Club / David Brooks	Melia "Melia" In the leaves of my ash is the breath of the wind, ...and I sing with it, sing of my love who had courted me, lain with me, seldom had sinned ...in the eyes of the Lady of Love. Yet the span of a mortal is short and is swift, ...and my honey was spent with his death, yet his kiss was the sweetest of anyone's gift ...that had touched me, my body or breath.

Oct 27 2009, 10:54 AM	#2
P'ter Crafter Craftmaster Join Date: May 2006 Location: Wolverhampton Gender: M Fan of: Favorite? Now Reading: avidly	Re: Melia Wow! __________________ "Truth is stranger than fiction: fiction has to make sense." Leo Rosten. "When I became a man I put away childish things, including the fear of childishness and the desire to be very grown up." C. S. Lewis "I find television very educational. Whenever somebody switches it on I go in the other room and read a book." (attributed to Groucho Marx) The Pedants are revolting! (against bad grammar)

Oct 27 2009, 07:11 PM	#3
jube Dolphineer Journeywoman Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Australia Gender: F Fan of: Dragons of Pern Now Reading: Puzzles and my thesaurus!	Re: Melia WELL DONE __________________ Dolphineer Journeywoman and part-time researcher.... Find me on ebay..... Here'tis!

Oct 31 2009, 03:27 AM	#4
GinnyStar Dolphineer Craftmaster Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Wausau, WI USA, Central Standard Time Gender: F Fan of: Pern, other SF works Now Reading: Dragonback Bargain	Re: Melia Cool, nicely written! __________________ Lover s s, s and friends Lover of and beads, http://www.change.org/profiles/GinnyStar Dragoncave GinnyStar2 Jellied Dragons Lair of Dragons http://dragcave.net/user/GinnyStar2 Thanks! Others: None at this time WIP http://archiveofourown.org/works/252259 http://www.daisy.org/learning-difficulties