Feedback: Campfire Coffee Story, the Creation of the Truck Stop/Norwegian Coffee - A Meeting of Minds

GinnyStar · Jun 28 2008, 02:55 PM

If you like it or not Feedback would be nice. Thanks

Brenda · Jun 29 2008, 12:05 AM

It's a funny story, but I have to say it is hard to read because the grammar is so screwed up. In particular, you seem to leave out words a lot. Does your computer have a grammar checker? I'm not sure if that would help.

Also, just a hint regarding feedback threads: either ask for feedback at the end of the story, OR in a separate thread. Looks like you did both here!

Please don't be discouraged from posting here, just keep in mind that you're trying to communicate and it's very difficult to receive the communication as it is.

GinnyStar · Jun 29 2008, 01:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Brenda

It's a funny story, but I have to say it is hard to read because the grammar is so screwed up. In particular, you seem to leave out words a lot. Does your computer have a grammar checker? I'm not sure if that would help.

Also, just a hint regarding feedback threads: either ask for feedback at the end of the story, OR in a separate thread. Looks like you did both here!

Please don't be discouraged from posting here, just keep in mind that you're trying to communicate and it's very difficult to receive the communication as it is.

Brenda how true on that. I had a dilly of a time. Right now I have MS Works and it came with this computer

I would like to update to MS Office for it has more power and can help a lot.

Jun 28 2008, 02:55 PM	#1
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Jun 29 2008, 12:05 AM	#2
Brenda Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: St. Louis Gender: F	Re: Campfire Coffee Story, the Creation of the Truck Stop/Norwegian Coffee It's a funny story, but I have to say it is hard to read because the grammar is so screwed up. In particular, you seem to leave out words a lot. Does your computer have a grammar checker? I'm not sure if that would help. Also, just a hint regarding feedback threads: either ask for feedback at the end of the story, OR in a separate thread. Looks like you did both here! Please don't be discouraged from posting here, just keep in mind that you're trying to communicate and it's very difficult to receive the communication as it is. __________________ . Check out my Pern fiction! Mirrim's Vigil News from the Weyr Missing Link Dragonsong: An Alternate Tune Ghost in the Tunnels Changes at Riverbend Hold Pern Songs

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