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Old Jun 11 2016, 07:59 AM   #4
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This has got potential, Mawra, but needs heaps of proofreading. Did it ever go anywhere?
I assume you mean - worked hard, well supplied, sneaking supplies, and homey with quilts (patchwork?) in the paragraph above. You could have cured animal skins on the floor too.

And it could round off quite neatly with a sentence or two about making Shala feel safe in her new place.
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