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Old Aug 16 2007, 03:06 AM   #2
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Default Re: Sackcloth and Ashes (a Talent fic)

This is very interesting! Feels a lot like Anne might've written it, although you've made a few grammar mistakes (site instead of cite in the first chapter, 'then' rather than 'than' in a few places are the main ones). Keep it up!
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