Thread: Fan Fiction: Flight (A Pern AU)
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Old Apr 22 2009, 12:59 PM   #4
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Just one thing (as I don't have much time now, am at work), I think you mean "ablutions" (washing, cleansing) and not "ablations" (to wear or cut away) up in the first section there!
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