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Old Sep 30 2006, 01:32 PM   #7
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Default Re: Feedback for Brenda's Pern Poems

I finally read them, and love them!

You're right - most of the 'twiddles' Anne has in the books really need expansion.

Problem was, I needed to go all the way to page three to see them. I wanted to bump them up, but wasn't sure if you'd want them bumped, or if you want to just add them to your signature.

I want to do something about the Oldtimers coming ahead. Not Lessa's ride - that's about her. But the sacrifice the Oldtimers made to come forward. To go with the story I'm working on. I just haven't found a hook yet.
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