[Brenda]

I posted my grammar/typo stuff at AMCF.

I was very impressed with this, as always with your characterizations of familiar Pern persons. And it seems very realistic.

The main thing that threw me was not being able to tell when this was taking place - I had it in my mind that it was before Dragondrums, because the flight between Kimi and Diver didn't seem to have occurred; Menolly and Sebell might as well never have been on that boat together. Then there was something about Jaxom and Sharra and I was like, whoa, this is MUCH later.