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Old Jul 20 2008, 06:04 PM   #6
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Wow. . . good job! I really like how it starts with Brekke's perspective, and shows her as the competent, confident person that I figured had to in there somewhere! A 5-turn-old Impressing, huh? It'll be really interesting to see what her life is like, and how she handles it all.

Keep writing!

P.S. I like the part where the cook offers to have F'nor's babies!

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