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Old May 22 2009, 12:43 AM   #19
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Anareth...I like it !!!
You seem to do well at letting your reader get a good idea of how they all look, along with their personalities...while most of them are looking at or sizing up the one of the other characters.

Everything you have discribed reads very well indeed.

If you as a writer... just started out with descriptions of each character, that would not only be very boring...but it would leave the reader flat...and looking for a more interesting book.

B U T.... The way you have gone about it you get to add to the characters full picture as your reading along...that will keep the interst of the readers high and very involved



Is it more difficult to write a modern day story...or one in a different period or place ???
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