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May 20 2009, 09:33 PM

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Feedback: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

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Posted By Brenda

Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

I enjoyed the read! I had to go back a couple of chapters to remember why Robinton was injured.

Just a couple of things that grabbed my attention as WRONG:

Menolly's tenth fire lizard is...

Forum: Exhibit Hall

Dec 31 2008, 07:08 PM

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Feedback: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

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Posted By Brenda

Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

It's your story, so it's your call - but the reason I mentioned these things is because they really jumped out strongly as being "wrong" or "not belonging on Pern." If it takes away from the story...

Forum: Exhibit Hall

Dec 30 2008, 12:47 AM

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Feedback: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

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Posted By Brenda

Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Hey! I finally had a chance to read the newest chapters (the end of the semester caught me with a sneak attack...)

Same kind of thing as before, I'm going to quote whatever I noticed - although...

Forum: Exhibit Hall

Sep 24 2008, 05:13 PM

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Feedback: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

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Posted By Brenda

Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

As I was reading, I copied the bits that I wanted to comment on, so I will just go through and quote those one at a time. Some of these are about whether something "belongs" in Pern, some are...

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