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Forum: Exhibit Hall May 20 2009, 10:08 AM
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Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

I knew I was missing an author's note...Menolly and Sebell's kids don't exist in this AU.

Thanks for reviewing! :)

My real life and my original fic intrude a lot, so yeah, sorry about the lag...
Forum: Exhibit Hall May 19 2009, 07:11 PM
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Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
Forum: Exhibit Hall Jan 1 2009, 07:40 AM
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Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Oh certainly, and thank you. You've caught many things that nobody else has mentioned. I hope I didn't sound grumpy or anything; I'm just prone to discussing things to death. ;)
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 30 2008, 01:14 AM
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Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Ha. You did find a lot of word-choice issues here. Thank you.



Yeah, my bad here. This goes on my list for when I do my big edit.



I think frou frou is fine. In the same category as...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 28 2008, 05:34 PM
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Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Eh, I've already moved forward. If I had thought the scene necessary I would have written it. As it is, we get a re-cap from F'lon on what happened. And he's being pretty amusing with it (to me,...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 27 2008, 07:28 PM
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Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Yeah, I have bad problems with car doors in winter giving me bad static shocks. I don't know why, but it usually travels up my middle finger to my elbow and gives me quite a painful jolt.
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Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 27 2008, 05:36 AM
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Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Hey Shalyn! Thanks for the reviews...you got me off my butt to complete chapter 10. Hee hee!

I mentioned it on the ff.net notes, but basically you're correct about lightning. I have it wrong. ...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 1 2008, 03:34 AM
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Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Anareth - This is what I was *hoping* was happening. I admittedly compare my stats to those of other Pern-fic writers, to try to see where I'm at (I want to progress as a writer), and it was a bit...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Sep 24 2008, 05:25 PM
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Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Oh yummy. If I can say that in this context without it sounding weird, lol. Thank you for reading, and in particular, thank you for the comprehensive comments!

Regarding wire:



Ah, didn't...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Sep 23 2008, 06:39 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 6,393
Posted By D. M. Domini
The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Please post any feedback that you might have for the new version of The Skyboom (http://forums.srellim.org/showthread.php?t=5811) below. Thank you for reading and reviewing! :)
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