A Meeting of Minds - An Anne McCaffrey Discussion Forum  

Go Back   A Meeting of Minds - An Anne McCaffrey Discussion Forum > Search Forums

Showing results 1 to 4 of 4
Search took 0.87 seconds.
Search: Posts Made By: Brenda
Forum: Exhibit Hall May 20 2009, 08:33 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 6,414
Posted By Brenda
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

I enjoyed the read! I had to go back a couple of chapters to remember why Robinton was injured.

Just a couple of things that grabbed my attention as WRONG:


Menolly's tenth fire lizard is...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 31 2008, 06:08 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 6,414
Posted By Brenda
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

It's your story, so it's your call - but the reason I mentioned these things is because they really jumped out strongly as being "wrong" or "not belonging on Pern." If it takes away from the story...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Dec 29 2008, 11:47 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 6,414
Posted By Brenda
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

Hey! I finally had a chance to read the newest chapters (the end of the semester caught me with a sneak attack...)

Same kind of thing as before, I'm going to quote whatever I noticed - although...
Forum: Exhibit Hall Sep 24 2008, 04:13 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 6,414
Posted By Brenda
Re: The Skyboom (v2 - rewrite) feedback

As I was reading, I copied the bits that I wanted to comment on, so I will just go through and quote those one at a time. Some of these are about whether something "belongs" in Pern, some are...
Showing results 1 to 4 of 4

 
Forum Jump

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 06:17 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2020, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

ds and characters based on Anne McCaffrey’s fiction are copyright © Anne McCaffrey 1967-2008, all rights reserved, and used bA Meeting of Minds forum owned by Cheryl B. Miller.
All references to worly permission of the author.