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GinnyStar Jun 28 2008 01:55 PM
Campfire Coffee Story, the Creation of the Truck Stop/Norwegian Coffee
 
If you like it or not Feedback would be nice. Thanks

Brenda Jun 28 2008 11:05 PM
Re: Campfire Coffee Story, the Creation of the Truck Stop/Norwegian Coffee
 
It's a funny story, but I have to say it is hard to read because the grammar is so screwed up. In particular, you seem to leave out words a lot. Does your computer have a grammar checker? I'm not sure if that would help.

Also, just a hint regarding feedback threads: either ask for feedback at the end of the story, OR in a separate thread. Looks like you did both here!

Please don't be discouraged from posting here, just keep in mind that you're trying to communicate and it's very difficult to receive the communication as it is.

GinnyStar Jun 29 2008 12:42 AM
Re: Campfire Coffee Story, the Creation of the Truck Stop/Norwegian Coffee
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Brenda (Post 112246)
It's a funny story, but I have to say it is hard to read because the grammar is so screwed up. In particular, you seem to leave out words a lot. Does your computer have a grammar checker? I'm not sure if that would help.

Also, just a hint regarding feedback threads: either ask for feedback at the end of the story, OR in a separate thread. Looks like you did both here!

Please don't be discouraged from posting here, just keep in mind that you're trying to communicate and it's very difficult to receive the communication as it is.
Brenda how true on that. I had a dilly of a time. Right now I have MS Works and it came with this computer :( I would like to update to MS Office for it has more power and can help a lot.


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